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The Thief and the Commander: Master Post

Intergalactic Action Squad, Go!: The Thief and the Commander


genre: Sci-Fi
pairings: Robin, Ehrenfried, and Feliu
word count: ≈55,000
rating/warnings: language. character death.
summary: The Inter-Galactic Action Squad is the first line of defense
from the galaxies' worst criminals. Ehrenfried Behrendt only joined to improve
his CV. Robin Grey just wanted to keep his career from sliding further into the
gutter. But even the best laid plans can go awry when what started out as an
escape ends with an assassination.

Table of Contents

Prologue

01: An Earthian Apart

02: Into the Darkness

03: Secrets

04: A Plan, A Routine, A Disaster

05: A Father's Betrayal

06: On Golden Utopia

07: The Funeral

08: Common Ground

09: The Biron

10: Crossing the Line

11: A Token

12: Ciphers

13: Freedom

14: Goodbyes

15: History

16: Bounty

17: Back on the Time
Ship


18: The End

Bonus content:

There is a Prequel where the germ of an idea for this story came from. It's in first person from Ehren's point of view, and it's not necessary to understanding what happens. I just thought I'd throw it in here if anybody wants to read it:

Prequel: The Recruit

Mix: Mix for Utopia by [livejournal.com profile] sister_ananke

And a wonderful Mix! Be sure to check it out!
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Chapter 18 : The End

Robin and Feliu stood at the window overlooking Ehren's room a week later.  Feliu had spent most of that week in protective custody being interrogated.  He was beginning to get used to his life as a series of questions.  It wasn't as bad as life with a bounty on his head.  He was going to do everything he could to ensure his father's capture.


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Chapter 17: Back on the Time Ship


"I can't believe you talked me into this," Yaretzi hissed at her brother in Bironese as she looked over the group of three I-GAS members that stood before her.

"I can't believe you let your boss kidnap Feliu for a bounty," Berilo replied in an Intergalactic Standard so that they would all understand what he was saying.

She clucked disapprovingly at her brother, and he shrugged.

"So, where is he?" Robin said.

"Hell if I know," she said. "I'm just the port-keeper who, for the record, if anybody asks, definitely didn't let you on this ship."

"We'll find him," Rasa said. She held up the portable tracking computer that had pinpointed Feliu's exact location on the ship.

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Chapter 16: Bounty


Tomorrow never came as far as meetings in the park went.  Feliu never showed up, and Robin was angry at first then he was concerned.  The bad news didn't stop once he'd reached his contacts at the I-GAS center on Utopia.  As it turned out, the safe-house wasn't as safe as it was purported to be.


    Feliu was missing.

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Chapter 15: History


Galiana greeted Robin exuberantly at the spaceport when he'd arrived, and noticed that he was decidedly glum and unresponsive.  She hugged him and dragged him through the crowds to their waiting transport so that they could talk in private.


    "Where's Ehrenfried?"  She asked when she had him alone.

    "Ehrenfried?"  Robin perked up in surprise at hearing the name then smiled bitterly at her.  "He's no longer my babysitter, mom.  Sorry to disappoint, but he's back on Tarain where he belongs."
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Chapter 14: Goodbyes


Ehren was back at his desk in the squad room, working diligently on the Yarzfeld database.  He was trying his best to ignore his gossiping peers.  He already assumed he knew what they were talking about and that the subject was him.  He didn't want to deal with it.  He'd never wanted to become the subject of office chatter, yet there he found himself.

    He grumbled over his paperwork until Axel broke off from a group and joined him.

    "Did you hear?"  he said.
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Chapter  13: Freedom



Next day:

Rasa felt groggy that morning since she had been staring at a holograph full of numbers for most of the evening with only short coffee breaks in between to keep her going. Beatriu had taught her how to set up and run the multi-filter program. That had taken most of the night, but by the time morning came the Naturian string had resolved itself neatly into a clear and readable time signature.

"I don't believe it," Beatriu said to Rasa as they stood staring at the screen, surveying their work.

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Chapter 12: Ciphers


Beatriu had left the squad room that evening with Robin holed up and grumbling over a mountain of paperwork in his office. Ehren had been in much the same state over the Yarzfeld database; a broken and archaic record of the history of the lost Yarzfeld galaxy. Restructuring the data was quite the herculean task for one man, and she could tell that Ehren was getting frustrated by the angry look on his face and the way he'd snapped at her when she'd said goodnight. She worried about leaving them alone for only a moment as they seemed both too deep in their work to be much trouble. .She headed down the corridors towards her room and found her interest piqued by a light shining out from one of the computer labs. She opened the door, curious to see who else was staying out late. There certainly was nobody schedule for a night shift in one of the more deserted areas of the building.

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Chapter 11: A Token


"Beatriu's going to kill me," Robin muttered as he stumbled into his trousers.

"If she's going to kill you, imagine what she's going to do to me," Ehren said from his vantage point on the bed. He was closely examining his boots for the proper amount of sheen having already gotten dressed.

"No, you don't understand." Robin chuckled as he inspected himself in his mirror. "She's just about my only friend in the world. She'll be harder on me."

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Chapter 10: Crossing the Line
 

Ehren slowly made his way back to Galiana's flat, dreading what Robin would have to say about his failure at capturing the Biron and feeling slightly guilty for hiding the conspiracy theory that was gaining a foothold in his brain.  He had no other reasons besides a gut feeling for trusting two men, who, for all intents and purposes, should have been the bad guys.  Ehren had been through twenty-four years of life though, and he was by no means naïve enough to think that people either lived on one side of the fence or another.  Everyone lived in that shady gray area every once in a while.  He had to look no further than Robin himself for evidence of that.


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Chapter 09: The Biron

Ehren drifted off to sleep soon after and woke what he thought was several hours later.  He was used to living on a hot planet, but at least there was some respite from the unrelenting heat of the sun at night.  On Utopia there was no night, and Ehren was finding that the perpetual sunlight made him tired and completely threw off his internal clock.


   Robin remained lying halfway across Ehren's stomach; an uncomfortable position for the smaller Earthian.  Robin's low Utopian body temperature was a nice surprise though.  There was a soft coolness radiating from him.  It was an unexpected pleasure, much like the cool side of a pillow.  Ehren didn't particularly want to move from the spot, but he was hungry, so he wriggled out from under Robin and stumbled down to Galiana's kitchen.

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Chapter 08: Common Ground



He stood in the doorway in awe of Robin who was intent on destroying everything in his room.  He was screaming about how everything was his fault and aiming epithets at an absent Feliu as he tossed his old journals from a bookshelf out behind him.  It was the only area of the room that hadn't yet been trashed.  Tables were overturned, clothes were strewn about the floor, and a chair was lying upside down and broken practically in half.  In his fury, Robin didn't even notice Ehren was there until he felt a hand on his shoulder.  He whirled around with a startled shout holding the last of the journals aloft as if he were about to smash it down Ehren's head.

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Chapter 07: The Funeral


Ehren had known it was going to be a long week since the assignment had filtered down from high command through Beatriu.  He spent most of his time standing in Utopian doorways keeping one eye on Robin and trying to be as unobtrusive as possible while the mother and son made funeral plans.  He had tried to ease the awkwardness of his presence by taking a step back and assuming as professional a demeanor as was possible.  As the week wore on, Ehren felt more and more useless as it seemed apparent that Robin was going to be the picture of good behavior.


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Chapter 06: On Golden Utopia



They materialized in the port room of the Golden City Spaceport, Capital of the Golden Utopia.  It was all Ehren could do to keep a cap on his excitement for visiting the planet that he had spent so many years studying back on Earth.  He knew it would do no good if he ran around admiring the architecture of the spaceport like a small child when the occasion of his visit was nothing if not somber.

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Chapter 05: A Father's Betrayal

Earlier:

"I don't like this," Yaretzi said softly to Feliu so as not to arouse the suspicions of the rest of the team.

"What?" Feliu said. "Looks like business as usual to me."

"Yeah," she murmured. "It's just a sense."

"Your amphibi-sense?" Feliu chuckled at her. "C'mon, Yaretzi. It's par for the course. We steal from the Dysprosians for the Utopians, and vice-versa all the time."

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Chapter 04: A Plan, A Routine, A Disaster

I think we can come to an agreement," Ganix Viernes said.  "This is a tenuous peace here in this galaxy
Dysprosians are a proud people and the Utopians are arrogant bastards."

   "We should know!" Izar replied with a chuckle.

   Ganix narrowed his gaze and leaned forward across the table.  "You're going to have to put something on the table if I'm going to risk helping you out here."

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Chapter 03: Secrets


Robin Grey woke with a start at the sound of small explosion somewhere above his head.  He jumped up from the sofa he had been sleeping on and quickly drew his own weapon only to find that it was trained on Beatriu David, who was grinning at him with devilish glee.

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Chapter 02: Into the Darkness


Feliu Viernes materialized in the teleportation room on the Time Ship Darkness.  He cursed at himself as he had tried to direct his course to his bunk to avoid detection.  Avoiding detection on the Darkness was a work in futility, though.  They monitored incoming time signatures closely, and  the teleportation room intercepted those signals in order to redirect them into a safe and central location.


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Chapter 01: An Earthian Apart

Ehrenfried Behrendt sat at his desk in the windowless squad room he shared with his class of recruits.  As they often did while the boss was away from his office, the rest of his peers were milling around the room gossiping and fooling around rather than concentrating on studying or the stacks of mindless paperwork that were part of their on-the-job training.  What they were interested in were the field exercises, the virtual reality training for use of the Time Travel Device, and everything exciting that went along with the job.


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Prologue: This is Utopia?


The dismal planet of Tarain was a perfect headquarters for the Inter-Galactic Action Squad: the first line of defense in galaxies full of criminals.  Being stuck there had never been Robin's life plan.  Assignment to headquarters meant either paperwork, endless meetings about I-GAS policy that never really amounted to much more than a waste of time, or the worst assignment of all: Training Commander.  When he'd signed up Robin thought he would be spending his time in the organization out in the field, seeing the universe in all its varied colours and diversity.  His work in the field had been short lived once he'd passed the recruit stage though.  He had suffered a demotion of his own making and found himself back at HQ with the reduced rank of Training Commander Class C, and with the most recent incident regarding one thief, Feliu Viernes, he was sure that he was likely to remain there for the rest of his career if he managed not to get decommissioned completely.


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